Finns writing Blog
Tuesday, August 11, 2015
Monday, August 10, 2015
Scootering
Suddenly I saw Nicolas Donovan racing around the track on his flash scooter and he almost hit me.In the distance I saw Lucas Hosking turning on to the curvy rap and WOW he did it gynormous jump. After a while Miss Collins wanted a try on the shiny colourful scooter so she did. Sneakily I got my difficult camera out to video Miss Collins and all of a sudden Miss Collins fell into the dirty sticky grass and the huge crowd laughed
THE END by Finn Blacklaws
Sunday, August 9, 2015
Bubble Gum
Delicious Hubba Bubba pops likes big hot air balloons in the bright blue sky.
Stretchy bubblegum tastes like tasteless strawberry flavoured gum when you put it in your mouth.
Sickly bubblegum looks likes huge stones from the pyramids in ancient Egypt.
Strong Bubblegum looks like gooey glue tack on the window.
By Finn
Tuesday, June 23, 2015
balloons
Bang fired the black gun at the colourful balloons.Moment of truth I said to my self.My heart was pounding while I was closing my eyes.Suddenly out of nowhere all of the colourful balloons exploded.
Kayaking
I heard a quiet breeze and suddenly I threw my kayak and my long yellow paddle into the gleaming bright blue water.Crash l did a huge cannonball into the wavy water.In the distance I saw a scary long incredible waterfall.l got and closer every second.My heart was pounding as l got closer and closer.
Wednesday, May 27, 2015
W.A.L.T Use when sentence starters
Suddenly late at night a golden flash of dangerous shiny bight lightning darted though the sky like a rocket.
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